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Post  Dusk on Thu Mar 22, 2012 4:20 am

UNDER CONSTRUCTION!

Alias: "Azure"
Human Name: Tsukiko Okazaki (Tsukiko means: Moon Child)
Cyborg Name: Zero
Age: 16 (6 months since rebirth)
Race/ Class: Cyborg (Class=None)
Gender: Female
Height: 5'2"
Weight: 100 lbs
Nationality: Japanese
Languages: Japanese, English

Mentor: Cyborg (What do you think?)

Power: ★★★★★ (4+1)
Speed:★★★★ (4)
Intelligence:★★★★ (3+1)
Willpower:★(0+1)
Durability: ★★★★★★★★★ (8+1)
Personality: ★ (1)

Mentor:

Appearance:



Powers/Abilities & Tech:
Superhuman Duability (Cyborg Zero Body): Azure's Body was created to take a beating like other. It is nearly impenteratable from many different elements. In addition, all of her hardware and mechincal parts are wate and shock proof. Her skin has been reinfirced with highly complex carbon atoms instead of the weak human flesh she had before. Not only is it almost as tough as diamonds, no water can get through it . If she is in contact with electricty her body will automatically absorb it. if by chance she is encountered with an extreme large amount of it, her programming dictates to release and take in the electricity until the intake of energy ceases. in addition, if she's exposed to a large amount of electricity her strength, agility, and weapons become alot stronger. As a cyborg, she doesn't need air, food, or water and can survive in the harshest climates and weather. Her body can withstand high degrees of heat and cold.

Superhuman Senses (Eye of Odin): Azure when prompted can activate the eye of Odin which allows her to see where her opponent is by using thermal, sonar, infared and many other visual enhancements. It can also aid in aiming and calculating the movemen o an object. When activated, Azure's eye will be alit with a blue flame.


Gungir: Named after the spear of Odin which is said never to miss its target. Azure possses a powerful cannon that fires a very powerful blue plasma like substances that is extremely explossive. This cannon can be used to fire extreme long distances. Its fallback is that it takes 10 seconds to fire one shot but, its plenty powerful enough to take down even the mos powerful of foes. The cannon has several different modes for combat, it can be transformed into a gatalling gun that fires bullets at incredible rates. Gungir is Odin's most versatile weapon and is her go to weapon for most scenarios.


Kusanagi: A scintifically perfected katana that can cut through nearly anything. It's edges are heated in plasma and it's composition is made of a titanium alloy able to withstand the wear and tear of battle. This is a tribute to azure's japanese heritage as well as providing her with a melee weapon for close encounters that doesn't slow her down that much. In addition Kusanagi does not take up any of her power while the other weapons do.


Overcharge: An ability that was created by accident. As Azure's body had the ability to take in and exhaust excess energy. This extra safey protocl also gave Azure the abilit to manipulate lightning to an extent. She can take in electricity and shoot it back at her opponent. If needed she can also take energy from her core to utilize electricty to how she sees fit.

Strengths: Azure is one tough girl that can take a real clobering but, will continue fighting until her body literally gives out. Her creators wanted to create the most durable cyborg ever created instead of littering it with internal weapons they made a very defensive cyborg and givin her extrnal weapons. She excels in fighting her enemies from long distances away able to take down airplanes and dsimate buildings. She specializes in dealing great amounts of damange to very large targets.

Weaknesses: Azure's weakness is her power core. Once depleted, she can utilize most of her weapons except for her sword. Her power can be very quickly depleted by her cannon or using Odin's eye for long periods of time. Her strength will also be dropped to 1 when her power core is at 0% and she will have to rely on her human muscles.

Weapons (Other than the ones listed above):
Plasma Pistol

Internal Communication System: Its sort of like a built in smart phone.

Fighting Style: Azure,being mostly mechanical, is fearless in combat. She has very little concern about herself and always to calculate and execute a plan to do the most damage to her opponent as possible. Her basic tactic for combat is quite simple. when she is in long range, she will switch to her cannon. when she is in medium range she will bring out her pistol and when she is in close range she uses her katana. She fights in like a zombie like state she's very reckless with herself but, always manages to deal much more damage to her opponent than her opponent does. She also relies heavily on her programming to make the right moves. She may ot have been militarily trained but, her processing system allows her to aim better, shoot faster and react quick enough to make up for that.

History:

Tsukiko grew up in Kyoto Japan and had a fairly normal childhood. She was an enthusiastic tomboy who loved to play sports. She had always dreamed of being a hero. She always one to speak her mind and her classmates just seemed to follow her as she was a natural leader. She was an adventurous and sometimes a little mischievous sometimes playing pranks or picking fights with bullies. In all matter of the word, she was indeed a tomboy.

However, her picture perfect childhood came to an end when her mother and father died in a tragic car accident. When she had heard the news, she was in shock and dismay. Her mind had been shattered as her psychological well being was gravely at stake. It wasn't very soon after she commited suicide by jumping off a very tall building. After being pronounced dead, a group of unknown scientist tried to revive her and managed to get readings off of her brain waves. They saw this as a prime opportunity to test out there revolutionary cyborg designs. They assimilated psychological barriers within her processsing system that co-operated with her human brain to stop her from going crazy again. Many of her memories are distorted and represssed from her by her creators. Due to all these restraints on her mental faculties, she is very distant from feeling much human emotion or attachments to anything.

Personality:
She doesn't have much of one. She has very few likes and very few dislikes. Not much of her is human anymore. In other words, a mac has more personality than her. However, certain things trigger her deepest and long dormant memories. However, somethings are better left forgotten. Sometimes deep in her sleep, she remebers the horrors of her past only to forget them as she awakes. Something isn't quite right....

NPCs: none

Sample RP:

Azure stepped onto the foot of the beach as she opened her dazzling blue eyes. She focused in on her target as she closed her eyes and reopened them as her one eye lit up with blue flames. Her eyes wide open as she lifted her heavy cannon in place as her target was about to arrive. Yet, to the naked eye one couldn't see what she was aiming at. But, inside that flaming eye saw a black jet going mach 6. she didn't know why she had to shoot it down only knowing that she had to. Her creators demanded it and who was she to complain? Its not as if she hated or were irritated with these missions. She didn't care. She sucked in the ocean air as if it gave the faintest air of freedom. Her eye locked onto the airplane which was still a good 80 km away but, she could see it. Her cannon began to vibrate as she hold down the trigger, the jet was so fast that she had to aim nearly directly straight in front of her. Her internal processing unit calculated at the speed the plane was progressing, in the next 10.5 seconds her blast of plasma would intercept the plane. It even put into factor the wind and the time it would take for her discharge would leave from the moment it left her barrel to the moment it would hypothetically make contact with the gas tank. Everything was perfect as everything unfolded as her processor predicted.

A blast of plasma was shot into the sky and in the blink of an eye the jet cruised by from one moment being invisible and the next being directly above her. The plane instanttly blew up in flames as Azure pointed her gun at the sky as the plane's scraps landed all around her. What was left of the plane's fuel tank blue up around her. Her blue eyes stared up at the sky as the red inferno burned around her. Her body had been scorched by the explosion but, she took no notice it. Lowering her weapon, she wordlessly left the beached area dragging her weapon through the sand without a single word.

"Sora kanari-desu" She said to herself.

(The sky is beautiful today)


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Post  Admin on Thu Mar 22, 2012 11:52 am

I understand that this is under construction so here is some constructive help.

1st = you do not have a class section that says none or a class that she is using.

2nd = no nationality on your character.

3rd = no languages are in place.

4th = no background so I cannot get a feel for her state of mind and who she is.

5th = no mentor but I can think of a few that could work.

6th = no NPC and Sidekicks section even if you do not have any you still need to write none.

7th = no RP Sample so I cannot get a feel of how this character will be played.

Just thought you should know.
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Post  Dusk on Thu Mar 22, 2012 6:20 pm

1-7= I KNOW XD

I was just tired and couldn't finish it Razz
Stilll.... Even the things i have now, I'm not too sure of it now... as for mentors.... Idk.... my character may totally change... so.... Idk.... i want to work out the bugs on this ones I'll post again when its totally finished.
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Post  Admin on Thu Mar 22, 2012 10:31 pm

ok no problem take your time you do not want to rush your character. but from what I am looking at she is awsome. The name of the powers kinda reminds me of something from fate stay/night or of that like mixed with the DC Universe. I like it.
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Post  Dusk on Fri Mar 23, 2012 12:11 am

Done
I'm open to hear about other mentors :p
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Post  Admin on Fri Mar 23, 2012 1:17 am

Ok Accepted. Hmmm so we have a massively armored cyborg with big bad weapons


Quick question did you and Vinio intentionally make similar backgrounds and electrical powers for your characters or was that by accident. either way I have a cool idea for your characters solo series of issue missions.
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Post  vinio2323 on Fri Mar 23, 2012 1:35 am

I didnt even read dusks profile if thats what ur asking so no I didn't even realize he was making a cyborg till after i had my card written XP

oh awsome character btw
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Post  Dusk on Fri Mar 23, 2012 1:41 am

To my knowledge.... No, I think it was more or less a coincidence.... Razz
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Post  Dusk on Fri Mar 23, 2012 1:41 am

oh thx! XD
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Post  Admin on Fri Mar 23, 2012 2:01 am

No problem I like the fact that your is a kick but fighter. In fact yours seems to remind me of Xenosaga with that robot character.

ok but keep in mind I will come up with plot points when I design your arch nemesis's and I will check with you first when I do it.

Oh did I forget to mention that yea every character gets some Arch Nemesis's one from actual characters that are already existing and one I will make and use to torment you. Mwahahahahahahahahahaha Twisted Evil
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Post  Dusk on Fri Mar 23, 2012 2:30 am

^_^
Oh thats awesome but, I should also give you a fair warning Dusk and Azure aren't going to just roll over oh and if u are stricken for ideas just type in white rock shooter and you'll find a very good archenemy if you wish to use her. Razz
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Post  Admin on Fri Mar 23, 2012 2:34 am

well I got the idea for azure's enemy from the pistol link you had of the 2 versions of her pointing guns at each other. I assumed that she was a clone or another model of the character so I decided to use the white version of azure but it will come with a twist.
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Post  Dusk on Fri Mar 23, 2012 3:15 am

Ahhh... cant wait then ^_^
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Post  Dusk on Wed Mar 28, 2012 9:56 pm

"Come to me, you lesser filth, let me cleanse you in the name of my God... right after I finish my cigarette."



Alias: The Tobacco Exorcist
Name: Brother Alastor James Augustine Cromwell
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Race: Half Human, 1/4 Demon, 1/4 Angel
Class: Demon Hunter
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 185 pounds
Nationality: English
Languages: English, Demonic, Angelic, Latin

Mentor: John Constantine



Stats:

STRENGTH: 3
SPEED: 3
INTELLIGENCE: 4 + 1
WILL POWER: 4 + 1
DURABILITY: 2
PERSONALITY: 4 + 2

Powers: Cunning, Sixth Sense, Arcane Knowledge, Pyrokinesis and Holy Orders

Pyrokinesis: The etymology is derived from the Greek words πυρ (pûr, meaning "fire, lightning") and κίνησις (kínesis, meaning "motion"). It is the ability to create or to control fire with the mind. The word is parallel to telekinesis, though arguably the "tele-" (meaning "from afar") rather than "-kinesis" is the part that ought to have been preserved. This power was granted to him no doubt by his demonic heritage.

Holy Orders: As an ordained member of the Catholic faith to do battle against the enemies of God and humanity, he can use holy powers. They include various abilities that aid him in battle particularly against demonic foes. He can emit a multi purpose touch or aura that wards of demons, weakens them and this same aura to heal others who aren't demonic. However, having demonic blood, he can not heal himself. This aura can also bless objects in order for them to give them a holy status which gives them protection against evil.

Weapons:

The Iron Cross:



The Iron cross is a marvelous weapon as developed by a good friend of Al's who is now a renown gunsmith for her fresh ides when it comes to guns. It was designed to pack a powerful punch far greater than one would need to take down an ordinary human. It uses a gas-operated mechanism normally found in rifles, as opposed to the short recoil or blow-back designs most commonly seen in semi-automatic pistols. Unlike most such pistols, the barrel does not move during firing. When a round is fired, gases are ported out through a small hole in the barrel near the breech. These travel forward through a small tube under the barrel, to a cylinder near the front of the barrel. The separate bolt carrier/slide has a small piston on the front that fits into this cylinder; when the gases reach the cylinder they push the piston rearward. The bolt carrier rides rearward on two rails on either side of the barrel, operating the mechanism. Its rotating bolt strongly resembles that of the M16 series of rifles, while the fixed gas cylinder/moving piston resemble those of the Ruger Mini-14 carbine.

- .50 Caliber Action Express & 7 rounds/ magazine
- 14" Inch barrel
- Ideal Range 50 meters
- Action: Gas-operated, rotating bolt
- MARK XIII version
- Customize trigger and Grip

Darkbane:
A curious demonic artifact that is also a demon itself. Strangely, it is a demon sword that is in fact a demon itself. A lesser demon to be exact and she is a sword and cand be in the form of a purple eyed girl with dark hair. In her sword form, her blade behaves like a normal katana would. The blade is very light and except for the hilt it literally weighs nothing. It can cut through incorporeal material such as ectoplasm and can even divide fire and defend against elemental attacks. Alastor just uses it mainly to cut things and to defend against powerful attacks.

Angelic Shield:
A shield in the form of a locket. Opening this locket would create a wing to appear on Al's back which will fold up to block almost any attack. The shield can only be opened 3 times every day and it is recharged at the crack of dawn. The wing's shape can be seen but, it is see through. It is difficult to explain how it appears but, if you ever played halo and seen the bad camoflauge where its not perfect but, you can still sort of tell that its there. I think you get what I mean.

Strengths:
Alastor is a specialist when it comes to supernatural occurances and whether it be a demonic, angelic or spiritual entity he must deal with, he can deal with it. His diversity of weapons allow him a variety of tools to work with.

Weaknesses:
Alastor is just a mortal man for the most part anyway so, he isn't as sturdy or as strong as many of the characters. In addition, since he specializes only in hunting certain types of enemies he has no experience actually fighting other types of enemies. In addition, being a brother of the faith he doesn't seek to kill anyone and lacks that killer instinct. If his enemy isn't undead, he will most likely not try and hurt them.

History:
Alastor's angelic and demonic heritage came directly from his mother. His mother's name was Lucretia a half angel half demon who was cast down from heaven. Her father was a demon while her mother was an angel being a half breed and neither totally pure nor evil, she was cast down to earth because she had no where else to go. She fell in love with an English man named James Cromwell who was a priest. The union of these two beings brought fourth Alastor. Alastor was seen by the catholic church as a thing! It was difficult to say what to do with him but, it was clear to see this child could be molded for their doing. Therefore, they trained him to become an agent for the church and a solder for God himself. His father passed away and with him, his mother's spirit went with his to comfort each other. As Alastor grew, he became a rather rough individual. He swore a lot, he smoked a lot and he drank alot as a teenager. The Church saw this as a sign that the boy was more demonic than her mother. However, Alstor became something of a wild card as he seemed to have great success in exorcisms. He was a born natural and soon, he learned how to combat demons and physical manifestations. The Church is no longer hiring him for these services as his tactics were seen as too unconventional and dangerous.

Personality:
Alastor is arrogant, short tempered and strangely has a boyish charm to him. He's cynical, grouchy and always seems to be picking a fight with everyone.

SAMPLE RP:
In the darkness of the alley, Alastor walked in a steady pace his cigarette burning in his mouth and his gun was also smoking. He rolled back his white hair before pointing into the end of the alley. Starring back at Alastor were two bulging red eyes, there was a trail of black blood leading towards the two floating red orbs. The bullet had lopped off the demon's arm completely. The demon snarled in pain, as it made revolting and undecipherable slurs that only Alastor understood. Rolling the cigarette in his mouth, he took a big breath of it in. The demon came charging after him, leaping several meters into the air. It had long claws and reddish skin. It was a lower demon as Alastor had thought not too much trouble to take care of. Alastor fired a bullet skywards as the 50 caliber action time bullet blew a big hole in the demon's chest. The demon still lunging reached out to swipe at his face, the demon hunter slowly drew his locket from his pocket. With a click he opened only to have the demon suddenly flung back as it scratched an invisible force. An angelic wing of glass opened up revealing itself before folding up behind him.

"SHeerah Garu GEEdo NAASHH!" The demon seethed under his breath.

"An angel? Hahaha.... No, I don't think so..." Alastor said as he fired more rounds into the demon lopping off its arms and legs.

The gun made a loud recoil as it's sound resounded heavily throughout the streets.

"AHhhhhhuuhhh!" The demon cried out in pain as it withered away, "You speak demon.... What are you!"

"Shit I don't know.... you tell me next time, when I see you in hell..." Alastor began to turn around before stepping on his cigarette with his foot only to put a new one in his mouth. A fire lit from it's tip without the use of a lighter. Walking forward, the entire alley came out in flames.

NPC Characters:

Nickname: Maria
Name: Darkbane
Gender: Female
Age: Unknown
Race: Lesser Demon (Demon Sword)
Class: None
Height: (Human form 5'8") (Sword form 6 feet)
Weight: (Human 125 lbs) (Sword 0.4 lbs)

Stats:
Strength: 1 + 2
Speed: 1
Intelligence: 5
Durability: 10 + 2
Willpower: 1
Personality: 1 + 2


Powers: Superhuman Durability, Change from Human to sword, Invulnerability to elements, Invulnerability to spirituality, and Immortality

Weapons:
She herself is the weapon.

Fighting technique:
In human form, she can only take a pretty bad beating. She isn't very offensive without someone to wield her.

Strengths:
She is very durable and can take many hits. In weapon mode, she can make a good defense against most kinds of attacks especially if they are magic. She can be put through many different types of physical deaths but, can never truly die. It is only through destorying her spirit can she truly be destroyed.

Weaknesses:
She is helpless on her own.

History:
This was the blade of a great and evil king but, it was thrown away from its normal universe in order to ensure that bloodline would never truly regain the power of the Darkness king. Sealed within this blade is half of the demon's spirit, the other half is in the blood of the Darkness King. She has long wandered the earth endlessly since nearly the beginning of time. She has always been the embodiment of the Demon's most favorite weapon Dark bane. She was forged by throwing the darkness king's most beloved daughter into the fire to increase the flames. Using demonic magic and ritual steps, the demon blade was created. However, interestingly enough it was this very weapon that ended the Darkness King's reign as it was only thing that could kill him. With it, dour sages sealed him in its blade and tossed it into another universe ensuring that Arma Dagon would never be whole again!

Personality: cynical and pessimistic about everything. She's the most depressing individual to be around when she talks.
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Post  Admin on Wed Mar 28, 2012 10:53 pm

Ok this is a good character although I have to say way too much info needed on the gun i like it but still it was not all necessary. second the angelic shield when you use it you must specify what move of mine you will block with it. Ok
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Post  Admin on Thu Mar 29, 2012 5:20 am

Oh I forgot to mention in my earlier post I accept this character but bear in mind Constantine in the comics is a foul mouth jerk so do not expect the kindest of mentors with him.
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Post  Admin on Fri Mar 30, 2012 4:19 pm

Where do you want to put your new DC character.
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Post  Dusk on Sat Mar 31, 2012 12:16 am

Sorry that one post in the avengers took forever to write XD

Well, yeah Constatine's one of my favorite characters though. Besides, sometimes the best teachers aren't always the kindest. As to where I want him, I PMd you where Razz
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Post  Admin on Sat Mar 31, 2012 12:23 am

ok good luck in the batcave
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Post  Dusk on Sat Mar 31, 2012 12:39 am

thx!
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